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:iconchidepichi:
Okay, here we go :

The Sketch:

Looks quite fine, doesn't have to be a masterpiece ;)

2-3:
I can see, that on these steps, the eyes go more and more apart from each other, it seems to be your major problem.

The coloring:

Face: you shade to much the "sides" of the nose and "ignore" the rest of the face, that makes it look awkward, also (depends on the sourrounding /light and such) the shadow has to be directed under the nose and hair.

She looks quite maskulin and a bit anorexic, because of that dark color on her cheeks.
Same because of the lips, maybe try to make the shape with colors next time :)

deco: needs shading .__.

maybe you can try to use different sizes of brushes, for a better result :)
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
yeah this was one of my worst ones haha. I honestly don't know what happened with this one and I was too lazy to go back and fix it haha. Thanks for the critique though :)
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:iconchidepichi:
Chidepichi Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wooah, that was fast, not bad ;3

It was my pleasure^^
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha :) Feel free to check out my better artworks lol
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:iconchidepichi:
Chidepichi Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you want to show me, just do so^^
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
I think it would be better if you go through my gallery on your own.
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:iconchidepichi:
Chidepichi Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was already there, but I don't know what you want to be critiqued in particular and your folders are a bit confusing to me ^^;
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:iconyorukochikokoro:
YorukoChikokoro Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Just click on browse (above the folders in my gallery) and go through. Critique any that interest you lol
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:iconchidepichi:
Chidepichi Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aahh, okay ^^
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